Wednesday, 4 November 2020

THE BEACH Narrative - By Nevaeh

 I was at the beach with my older brother Pickle, and we were going surfing. I had my yellow board and Pickle had a green one. As we were running towards the surf, we heard our mum yell back at us in warning saying “be careful”. Running with my board in my hand, I see Pickle jumping over all the waves coming in. We hop on our boards and start to paddle towards the big waves. Once we reach our point it is calm and still. The water a deep black/blue colour. I look at Pickle, he looks back, we smile. I see a big wave approaching and stand up. As i stand up I scrape my shoulder against the side of the board and see a bit of blood run down the back of my arm, ‘It’s fine’, I say to myself. Pickle looks at me again. Not worrying about it, I stand up right before the wave, and surf. The breeze running through my hair and the salty taste in my mouth, is exactly what I love. I come back in after that wave, blood still running down my arm. As we paddle out again, we see something moving in the water. Not worrying about it once again, we keep paddling. We reach the surfing point again, small waves producing in the meen time. 

Pickle is looking at me worried as…. A shark comes and bites my arm off. Pickle starts yelling for mum and dad while I lay there unconscious. Pickle carries me in and takes his rash top off to tie around my now gone arm. Blood oozing down my body and tears streaming out of my eyes. 

I don’t remember much about what happened after that but I remember waking up in the hospital bed. A pain like fire was racing through my body. I went to go grab my arm. It was gone. The doctor walks in, with a piece of paper in his hand. He is talking to my mum and looking satisfied with himself. He told my mum I was going to live!

After a few weeks of no arm, we have a meeting with the doctors. They had found the shark that bit my arm off. As well as biting off my arm, it also got a chunk of my board stitch in its sharp yellow jaws. The shark was on the beach, laying there lifeless. I looked at it, a lump forming in my throat. My dad brings my board up because I can no longer carry it. He places it in the mouth of the shark, as if he was putting the last piece of his puzzle in the spot. It was a match. I began crying, tears pouring onto my face. My mum grabbed me and hugged me.


Wednesday, 23 September 2020

Dawn Raid ThingLink

 

this is my dawn raid ThingLink that I have been working on for the past 2 months. It's about a girl called sofia and she is living in the 1900s. she has been dreaming about these gogo boots that she finally put on laybuy. her brother is also one of the polynesian panthers....

What Good Writers Do!

 

this is a teaching slide about what good writers do. Feel Free to use any of this information. Maybe you could even write a blog post with these tips! HAPPY LEARNING!!!

Tuesday, 22 September 2020

Dawn Raid book trailer

 

Made with Clipchamp      
for my thinglink task I did a book trailer for dawn raid using clip champ create   

Monday, 21 September 2020

ᛕ꠸ꪀᦔꪀꫀᦓᦓ🙌

 

for Kaiarahi we have been doing kindness. we had to pick a couple of tasks that the teacher had put up for us. So for the 2 that i picked I did the alphabetical words describing kindness and the invention key: design a badge showing or encouraging others about kindness

Thursday, 10 September 2020

My Get Creative All About Me slide show

 

 this week for get creative i made an all about me slide. This slide shows everything or nearly every thing about me. Hope You ENJOY!!

Thursday, 3 September 2020

GLOBAL WARMING TASK 5


For this weeks reading we were learning about global warming. One of the tasks was to design a tool to help you survive global warming so this is what I made.