Thursday, 26 March 2020

My Paradise

My Paradise
I dream of my perfect paradise
Thinking I want something nice
Somewhere on an island
Or somewhere on the highlands
A place on the beach
A place they serve iced tea with peach
I want to go on a nice vacation
No where near a rainy nation
I lay in bed thinking I want something nice


For my perfect paradise
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous26 March 2020 at 11:23

    This is such a cool little poem Nevaeh. Perfect rhythm and rhyme. Well done.

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  2. Vicki @ Manaiakalani3 April 2020 at 12:29

    Kia ora Nevaeh,

    Such a great poem. I'd love to be able to head to a beach or an island... especially while we are stuck at home! How are you finding lockdown? My dog is loving having me home all the time and we go for lots of walks around our block.

    Whaea Vicki

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